Dear you,
Thanks for telling the truth,
Clearing everything up for me,
Before I drown,
In my own feelings for you.
Dear you,
Please don't say that you are sorry,
As if this is your fault,
You didn't do any wrong,
As you have the right to choose,
So do I,
The wrong is all mine,
For having the feeling towards you.
Dear you,
I will gap myself from you,
To make sure I can dump this feeling,
Far away,
And come back as friend,
Like you wanted to.
Dear you,
Take care.
P/S: Mood jiwang. Still alive. Life goes on.
July 28, 2009 at 2:24 PM
first
July 28, 2009 at 2:25 PM
sedih a plak entri ni..
cis. putus ke? rilek2..
(lu kena ajar wa karangan inglish!)
July 28, 2009 at 2:37 PM
3rd hohoh
July 28, 2009 at 2:39 PM
yes that batter for both of you
no heart feeling la.. friend forever
July 28, 2009 at 2:43 PM
salam..bro,
seronoh baca puisi hebat anda..:))
July 28, 2009 at 2:52 PM
Nice poem.. suka bca.. sweet je.. dear you mcm lgu aveged sevenfold plak.. :p sapekah dear "you" 2??
p/s: truskn bkarya..
July 28, 2009 at 2:52 PM
hmmm puisi jiwang yg sedih
July 28, 2009 at 2:54 PM
T'tgl..
Kamu sgt jiwang skrg, adakah hati tlah ada "bunga2 cinta".. lalala~
July 28, 2009 at 2:59 PM
Kadang-kadang entri u menyentuh hati jugak kan... Wish u will be happy always dgn ur 'dear you' tu.
July 28, 2009 at 3:00 PM
hiks hiks ginjal ku bergetar nyeh nyeh .....
July 28, 2009 at 3:02 PM
opppsss...
agak jiwang tp mcm sedih je aku rase..mmm..
July 28, 2009 at 3:09 PM
Jiwanges!!
July 28, 2009 at 3:30 PM
abang
what happen?
xshare ngan yana pun
July 28, 2009 at 3:48 PM
skli skla jiwang xpa la. x berisiko kan?hehe
July 28, 2009 at 3:58 PM
kalau ada jodoh tak kemana..
setiap jodoh dah ditentukan oleh Nya..
sabar...
jodoh anda pasti yang terbaik utk anda nanti
dan dia pastinyer sedang menunggu....
July 28, 2009 at 3:59 PM
jgn sedey sedey tau..
jangan gaduh gaduh ...
friend 4 ever...
July 28, 2009 at 4:16 PM
hmmm... konfem ke 'You' bermaksud mcm tuh??? kot2 mau tapi malu..
July 28, 2009 at 4:20 PM
adehh
takkan da putus harapan kot..
if there's a will there's always a way..
July 28, 2009 at 4:44 PM
just let it be..
if she s back, meaning is urs
=)
July 28, 2009 at 5:06 PM
jiwang sangat ni, pesen nak kawen dah ni.
July 28, 2009 at 5:08 PM
uiyo incik grunge..
u're so talented as u can expressed ur feelings in this beautiful poem. hope that u don't look a bit down in the mouth... cheer up bro!
July 28, 2009 at 6:22 PM
eyyyhhh
asal org lidi first neyh ??
July 28, 2009 at 6:22 PM
eyyyhhh
asal org lidi first neyh ??
July 28, 2009 at 6:23 PM
alamk. ter spam lak.
hehe ;)
July 28, 2009 at 6:27 PM
mood jiwang sudaa dtg
n aku pown da dtg ;p
kembalikan tahta aku weyhhhh !!
July 28, 2009 at 6:32 PM
nice~
=)
July 28, 2009 at 7:51 PM
Oranglidi: Wei, aku bangga ko buat macam ni dekat blog aku. Selalu ko buat cenggini dekat blog milimilo jer wei.
Jap, nanti aku antor kaunselor (member aku dekat UTP) ajo ko english. Adeh, ko bongak ar kalau ko tak teror english, kata UTP medium english.
Notso_violet: Aiks, third jer ke?
Mamai: You are rite bro. No heart feeling, friends forever.
Anak laut: Pujian kamu ni terlalu tinggi dari pencapaian saya. Kamu lebih arif dan tahu anak laut.
V|P Flora: Karang poem sebab dah takde idea nak tulis entry pasal apa.
Fitriah: Adeh, poem ni masih kurang jiwanya dan tidak seperti versi pertama.
V|P Flora: Bunga yang ada, bunga tahi ayam jer ni. Lalalalala.
Notso_violet: Hahaha, mana ada sedih, just an entry. Lalalala.
Me: Tiap kali ada poem, ada jer ko kan. Lalalalala. You and I, in three years time. :P
Dilot: Adeh, sedih ke dilot, jangan nanes tau.
Tedi: Jiwangs, sebab manusia punya hati dan perasaan.
CikYana: Takde apa la Yana. Abang okies sahaja.
Anak Gemilang: Sebenarnya ada juga risikonya Ora. Risiko sedih dan frust menonggeng. Wakakakaka.
Mimie Azimask: Hehehehe. Betul mimie, kalau jodoh tak kemana.
Tak sedih mimie, penat saja. Minggu ni full throttle audit ni.
Jard: Perghhhh, ayat ko ni aku rasa best plak Jard. Lalalala.
Mimi: Putus harapan, sebab Mr Joga Bonito. Lalalalala.
Bluecity: Am letting myself free actually. Free from debt. :P
K.e.r.i: Wuits, lambat lagi beb gua nak kahwin.
Nur: Hehehe, thanks for the compliment teacher. Am still ribena kid, who need to learn and being pampered. ;)
Innz: Wakakaka, dah ko takde, skang orang lidi rajin wei datang sini.
Tergugat la ko nanti Innz. Nanti aku kembalikan semula takhta ko.
Miss Siv: Thanks for the compliment Mal.
July 28, 2009 at 8:12 PM
dearest you...
if ever the pain in your heart becomes unbeareable
know that i'm always here...:-)
July 28, 2009 at 8:26 PM
terharu bc poem nih...best!!keep it up a gud work...
P/S: rasa2 cam kenal jer "dear you" tuu..leh x nak announce kat sini my senior...opssss terlebih sudaaa...hehehe
July 28, 2009 at 8:44 PM
sdey nya poem neh..
July 28, 2009 at 8:57 PM
Hye GRuNGe...
Sometimes being a friend r better then evrything...
friendship last forever.... till the end
hehe.... thanxx 4 leave me a comment ... ;P
lalalaa....
July 28, 2009 at 9:08 PM
makin la berkarya, makin pandai mengarang...nice poem ni walaupun x tau utk sapa
hehe
July 28, 2009 at 9:53 PM
dear you,
hi hi bye bye
lalalalalalaaaa...:p
July 28, 2009 at 9:58 PM
Bukan first comment!
July 28, 2009 at 10:00 PM
Naper nak kena declare first or not heh ... hih hih heeee!!
Ops .. dear you
I feel lots of sorrow in the poem ... schedule n3? Hah, orang busy!
July 28, 2009 at 10:35 PM
Sadis woo..
Yarhh dump dat feeling..Far away!!!
July 28, 2009 at 11:42 PM
jiwa kaco nampak
July 28, 2009 at 11:49 PM
salam..
tq sudi singgah memberi komen..saya amat hargainya..
bro, puisi ni untuk sapa?
July 28, 2009 at 11:55 PM
ahaha.. bagus2.. antor a dua tiga orang kaunselur wei. hehe..
medium utp inglish, medium skolah menengah? haaaa..
xpe2.. ade mase wa kasi entri inglish sedas. ahha..
(wa memang beruntung dapat komen 1st haha.. bukak2 je dah ade entri baru. haha..)
July 29, 2009 at 1:03 AM
terasa la bila baca..
hakhahahaaaaaa~
July 29, 2009 at 2:04 AM
bukan dari hari tu bro mmg jiwang...hikhikhik..malu2 lak nak ngaku....
out of topic--->im still searching petua nak kuruskan pipi k..hikhikhik....
July 29, 2009 at 2:04 AM
bukan dari hari tu bro mmg jiwang...hikhikhik..malu2 lak nak ngaku....
out of topic--->im still searching petua nak kuruskan pipi k..hikhikhik....
July 29, 2009 at 2:11 AM
rsiko.. alamk. cmana ne..
nmpknya ini mnjukkn grnnge ni.. ada tnda2 nk kawen. haha.
eiks. x berisoko ni. ini adalah pluang dan ruang<---jgn mrepk lgi.. haha..
erm..
tp. siapakh si dia ni..
aah. ada org nk annoucne dia sp tuh..
kasi taw la.
shring is caring. hahaha. ora nk taw gk. sp yang btuah tu..
July 29, 2009 at 2:43 AM
Patungcendana: Dearest you. Will be going to Kuantan around 10/11. Hope we can meet there. Dearest you. :P
Zarina: Macam kenal ke? Lalalala.
HanisygBaek: Sedih ke? Ish ish ish.
Fia Batrisya: You are rite friend. Btw, saya ada masa, saya akan singgah baca dan komen.
Khairil's: Thanks beb. Nak upah aku jadi along tak wei?
Ivy Metaga: Hi when I come to Sarawak, bye me when I leave Sarawak. :P
Lili11: Wakakakaka. Boleh macam ni.
Writing with feelings, sebab tu ada bunyi sorrow tu. Btw, entry pukul dua hari kerja memang entry schedule.
Shasha Lee: Hehehehe, easier say than done.
Ber_uwang: Jiwa kacau, tanda kuang beramal aku ni beb. *insaf*
Anak laut: Puisi ni dah jadi hakmilik semua selepas di post dekat blog. Siapa mahu, boleh ambil (masih agi mahu berahsia).
Oranglidi: Member wa memang kije kaunselor beb dekat tempat lu. Lu jangan plak cari. Kalau mau cari, cari Datuk Dr Zainal tu. Wakakakaka.
Enyheartsdiamond: Entry ni untuk orang lain la eny. ;) Someone that most of the bloggers know. Lalalala. Elemek, pecah rehsia sudah. :P
Dalia Liyana: Mana ada jiwang arrrr.
Anak Gemilang: Erk, masih lagi rehsia dear you ni Ora.
July 29, 2009 at 9:57 AM
wahhhh...
touching lol~
semoga ketemu johohnya.
dapat aku kakak ipar sorg.
h0h0~
;p
July 29, 2009 at 10:21 AM
enciK GrunGe...
jgn la panggil sy "mal"~
pggil siv okay~
=p
July 29, 2009 at 11:14 AM
Weii ... n3, n3?? Schedule lari ker? n3 ...??
Precious
July 29, 2009 at 11:15 AM
Owh .. terforgot!
Last n3!!
Agaknyer la ...
July 29, 2009 at 11:16 AM
wooiii sorry mori ...
Bukan last n3 (tu lah dok fikir fasal n3 jer ...)
Last comment lerrrr ...
July 29, 2009 at 12:03 PM
dearest you...
10/11 august?...will be waiting...:-)
July 29, 2009 at 1:12 PM
ok la 2 grunge.. jnji u update blog.. :p
July 29, 2009 at 1:13 PM
bunga taik ayam pn bunga gak.. :)
July 29, 2009 at 1:13 PM
pasni nk pgl kamu Grunge "the jiwang" boy.. tp boy ke?? lalala~
July 29, 2009 at 7:05 PM
*perati aje..* tak de idea nak respon apa.
Awak. hari nie saya dah mula bekerja semula.
July 29, 2009 at 9:33 PM
yeewww...
sile kembalikan takhta ku !
July 29, 2009 at 9:33 PM
bile tah aku nk naek balik neyhh
July 29, 2009 at 9:34 PM
tuka gadget weeeyyhhh ;p
July 29, 2009 at 9:34 PM
hobi adelah nyepam2
;p
July 29, 2009 at 10:08 PM
er knp sorg komen smpai 3?
July 29, 2009 at 10:30 PM
SAH JIWANG...tak tukar entry ni...
ke nak cukupkan komen 100....hehehhee.....
July 29, 2009 at 10:56 PM
aku dtg ag
July 29, 2009 at 10:57 PM
nk spam je
July 29, 2009 at 10:57 PM
tenet laju la plak
July 30, 2009 at 1:12 AM
nt dalia nak jd komentar yg ke100...hehhee....
out of topik----> awat chat box dalia tak ok? ada sape2 leh tulun???huhuuuh...
July 30, 2009 at 1:13 AM
nt dalia nak jd komentar yg ke100...hehhee....
out of topik----> awat chat box dalia tak ok? ada sape2 leh tulun???huhuuuh...
July 30, 2009 at 2:07 AM
innz mmg spammer bertauliah~
hahaha
July 30, 2009 at 11:32 AM
innz duk komen macam tuh konpem takder orang boleh lawan dia..ko kasi jer RM50 tu kat dia..haha
July 30, 2009 at 3:56 PM
Innz .. ngelat! Tengok tuh si Grunge dok senyum jer ...
July 30, 2009 at 9:20 PM
Woihh penat ler klik ke sini ... n3, n3?
n3?!
July 30, 2009 at 10:18 PM
wau manyaknyer komen komen....
July 30, 2009 at 10:18 PM
hahaa !
ne de ngelat dowh
pandai2 r maO idup
July 30, 2009 at 10:19 PM
mmg port aku spam ni
huahuahuah !
July 30, 2009 at 10:19 PM
onwer blog neyh nk bg komen sampai seribu baru mao update kah ?
July 30, 2009 at 10:20 PM
penat da spam
stok sampai raye
muahahaha !
July 31, 2009 at 3:06 PM
75 comments? Huihhh ... is a compliment in order?
Congrats anyway ...
August 4, 2009 at 11:27 PM
inzz <<< die nak suh komen sampai beribu-ribu...
Baru die hupdate..lalala